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« Thread Started on Dec 19, 2008, 9:52pm »
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Okay, so to get the ball rolling with the new year, I've been considering plot ideas. I've considered something along the lines of a string of crimes, possibly rapes and such, that terrorize the students as summer nears. Any contributions? More than welcome. Here's the rough draft of what I'm thinking so far.

And she reached to touch her head, feeling nothing but bare stubble where her golden locks once lay. And she screamed.

Darrington University finds itself at the close of another year, graduations nearing and summer coming ever closer. But as spring begins, the campus is wrought with a fear the will shake DU to the ground. Families scared for their loved ones, students terrified to go out, and teachers baffled and defensive, the campus is alight with activity.

A string of rapes has brought to the surface a disturbing weavework of underground crimes, all performed by a mysterious member of the student body, someone that no one would most likely expect. The most disturbing of the rapes was most likely Marissa Parker's, the latest of the crimes as well. The perpetrators have become more aggressive in their tactics, now instead of merely shaving a portion of the victim's head, they shave it all. Marissa's naked scalp serves to prove this true.

How long will it be until someone else is victimized? How long until the attacks become more frequent? How long until someone dies?


So...what do you think? If it's way too cliche, let me know, and I'll try to think of something else, but it's the only thing that's made sense to me at this point. I also thought of perhaps a Columbine type plot, but I didn't know how to work that out either.


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« Reply #1 on Dec 24, 2008, 5:47pm »
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I really like it, but I don't quite understand the whole shaving of the head thing. XD
I think something gruesome should happen, like...they carve a letter into their skin? I mean, not deep enough or hard enough to kill them, but enough to cause great pain and leave a scar.
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« Reply #2 on Dec 24, 2008, 7:51pm »
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See, I was thinking it as a sort of 'calling card'. Something to draw fear in everyone. Cause, a carving no one would know abotu it if you didn't want them to. Your head shaved, everyone knows, and it freaks people out more. Well, it would around my home, seeing as the girls here prize their hair.

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« Reply #3 on Dec 24, 2008, 8:08pm »
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But getting your head shaved is a bit...drastic. And I mean, it's not really 'Oh Em Gee run for your life' material, XD.
I don't know. What if it's something like, carved onto your cheek?
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« Reply #4 on Dec 24, 2008, 8:12pm »
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The head shaving thing ads a nice touch to it. I like it!
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« Reply #5 on Dec 24, 2008, 8:21pm »
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The plot in general is interesting, and creepy to boot. The head shaving thing is kind of an odd touch. Does the killer want the hair for some reason? Is it some kind of message to students?

The killer's motives are what's got me thinking. xD I'm a huge thriller/mystery geek, so this kind of thing is really cool to me. Do you have any ideas about the killer, or are they just one of those psycho-killer types?
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« Reply #6 on Dec 24, 2008, 8:42pm »
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I lurves you Becky, but I still like the head shaving bit better than carving. Carving is a little...Salem Witch Trial if you ask me. Though they have nothnig to do with each other actually, they just remind me of each other for some odd reason.

ANYWAYS.

I was thiking about this over dinner, and what if the killer isn't a killer. Yet.

What if...

    -He is a serial rapist and shaves the girl's head as a calling card/warning
    -Sends creepy messages bullitened to like, the bullitens on the school halls saying things like 'I'm looking for you' or 'I'll find her. I'll kill her.' Sending messages that he has one specific target in mind, one that when he hits her, she'll be the first to die
    -And I was thinking on having a news staff that would cover the rapes in article form in a specific board, led by an editor obviously, and such.


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« Reply #7 on Dec 27, 2008, 5:38pm »
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Mer, I relaly, REALLY like that idea. And I'm totally on board for Hayden being one of the news article writers. Then that would give them a reason to come after Aiden, but he saves her right before her head gets shaved and she dies. >D

Hm. You are a very clever person, Mer. And will someone be roleplaying the killer, like, volunteering their character to be him? Or will the man just be and 'inside' roleplayer, and whoever is in the thread roleplays them?
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See, that's where I'm at a loss. Should we have an actual character be it? I think it would create more drama myself. But if so, who would be willing to create a character/sacrifice an older one. Personally, I think a sacrifice would be cooler, but I understand if no one wishes to.

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« Reply #9 on Dec 28, 2008, 2:27pm »
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Having a character be the killer instead of an NPC would be really cool. How much creative freedom would the person whose character is the killer have? Would the admins tell them what plots to make, or would you guys just let that person run free and be as crazy as they want?
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I'm all for free creativity, but I would like all decisions to be cleared through PM's first, then can be carried out. But I probably won't veto anything too drastic. We just have to make sure that the characters involved agree on what will go down, just so there's no power playing.

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Sound great to me. We just need to find a volunteer to either make a character or sacrifice one. Hm..

We also need to think of a way to end his whole killing spree. Death? Prison? Hm.
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I WILL TOTALLY MAKE A RAPIST CHARACTER ME ME ME ME ME ME!!!!!!!! oops...erm. I mean that would be interesting. It would be a student right?
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Hehe. >;D
Okay, then hop to it, chick!
I'd totally make him a nutcase, if you ask me.

Thanks for volunteering! =D
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OK I am brainstorming right now. I'm think he has some sort of grudge on the school(not sure why yet) and he is taking his revenge on the students. He's a totaly wacko- like totally wacked out and..yeah. Maybe he got thrown out for sexually harrassing people? Or maybe...idk
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Could be someone who was thrown out for doing something he didn't actually do... so he comes back to do something worse than what he was accused of.
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I put soemthing similar to that in his history I think
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I could make a character that was a rape victim :) and she could be pregnant and such, if ya want me to
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